OOC Revelations of Violence

[Specter of Death]

FellowKnight, as much as I like your character card, it is really great actually. I set the age barrier so that all the champions had very limited skill bases in order for the fighting to be very even. I feel like your character has a little bit to much of a backstory and experience to fight against young adults. I think it would be better if you

1. Created a new character using some of the same basic principles: Maybe a poor child who was saved by your 35 yr. Old ranger, who then strived to become like him. In the process, he was abducted by slavers and put into the Underground, and sees it as a way to become a Ranger. Something like that. OR

2. I can use your character as a Trainer like Skies. Though this option is a lot less appealing, as your character doesn't seem like the type of guy to exploit young people for the sake of greed.

I personally am interested in your writing style, and if this was any other RP I would except you and your character in a heartbeat.

 

[fellowknight]

As much as i'd like to use Barnan again, i think i should make another. Give me around 10 minutes at the most, and it'll be done.

 

[fellowknight]

Name: Haaki Alfhed

Race: Nord

Age: 22

Class: Aspiring Ranger

Quick Personality Analysis: Headstrong, Reliable, Fair, Lawful-good, Forgiving and unforgiving at times

Quirks: Scared of thugs

Aspirations: Become a great ranger, explore nirn, Find Barnan again.....

Looks:
(In case you can't see these features.) Brown hair hanging past his shoulders, small muscular frame, sea-blue eyes.

Current Gear: Longwood Bow, Silver Arrows, Roughspun Clothes set, Silver sword.

History: Growing up in the streets and alleys of Riften, life for Haaki wasn't easy. He constantly worked his arse off, trying to keep himself and his family from being killed or otherwise disposed of. He got in good with some of the major skooma dealers and soon, became a major one himself. He even devised a plan to rise to the top, carefully executing the other dealers in the process and bringing his family with him. But, everything went terribly wrong when the Orc Crimelord, Snagamul, saw his plot and had his house set fire while Haaki was away. His entire family died that night. Two days pass, and he lay in an alley, beaten by Snagamul's thugs, awaiting the final blow that would send him to Sovengarde. He was convinced HE messed up everything, and it was HIS fault his family was burned alive. He was ready to die. But, it never came. Opening his eyes at the Shink! sound, he saw a man garbed in gold and black armor, velvety black cloak wavering as he sliced through the thugs with ease. Before he could even thank the man he only pulled Haaki to his feet, nodded to him, and disappeared.

After serving the appropriate time in jail, Haaki was released and ready to start a new life. He felt fresh and cleansed. He wanted to be exactly like the man who saved him. Like Barnan. But his dreams, a few weeks later, were soon interrupted when he was randomly abducted by a pair of Slavers while on his way to Cyrodiil. While anyone else would have seen it as a curse and a prison, Haaki saw it as a challenge and a goal. He took this abduction as his own personal mission to strike out and become a great ranger. And, from his past career, coin would NOT be a problem.

 

[Specter of Death]

Alright. I like this Character. I think it will play in alot better in this RP than Barnan would. No need for an example of writing, as I feel it was provided in Barnan's CC. Did you want this color for dialogue or another one?

 

[fellowknight]

Thats fine. I'm not picky.

 

[Seanu Reaves]

Okay so preferred color for dialogue is this!

I like your idea because it means I can reference Orwyn from Oblivion. But yeah I like the angle you proposed.

 

[fellowknight]

Is there an availible link to the actual RP?

 

[Specter of Death]

I don't have the time to officially start the RP right now. Give me until tomorrow, and I should have it ready to go.

 

[fellowknight]

Understood.

 

[Specter of Death]

RP is Open! http://skyrimforum.com/threads/revelations-of-violence.36002/

Unfortunately, I will not be on from 2 - 8 tonight as well due to work again. Post, and I will bo on as soon as I can!

 

[Seanu Reaves]

http://skyrimforum.com/threads/revelations-of-violence.36222/

I think you posted the link for this OOC Thread cause it went in a circle for me.

 

[fellowknight]

Same. Posting now.

 

[CapObvious]

Wait. Aerin's a woman, Fellowknight! You need to fix that in your post.

 

[fellowknight]

Ohhhh......



-EPIC FACE PALM- I HAD NO IDEA!!!! GAHH!!!! I'M SORRY!! LOL!! I'll fix it......i'm still laughing. Sorry, sorry.

 

[CapObvious]

Haha. It's okay. Just pay attention to our characters cc's when you post.

 

[fellowknight]

Alright, edited. Sorry about that XD.

 

[Specter of Death]

My bad guys. I just realized I didin't name this thread Revelations of Violence (Recruiting)... I'm dumb. Lol. Though it looks like you all found it. Sorry about the mix up.

 

[Majir-Dar]

I'm going to go eat then come back and post.

 

[Specter of Death]

Ok. I am going to post our fight. Or at least part of it, leaving you enough to cover in your post.

 

[fellowknight]

Alright.