Khasrin
Fusozayiit
Question before I start putting up the next chapter, which is just about ready for posting (finally took me long enough):
I thought it might be interesting if Nikhaya and Onmund were keeping journals throughout the story, with entries at the beginning of each chapter (one chapter would be Onmund's, the next Nikhaya's, and so on) done in the style of the books you find in Skyrim. Might add a little depth to their tale if they could tell pieces of it themselves.
Anyone like this idea, think it's not necessary, etc.? If anyone wants to see this, I'll probably go back and add them to the last six chapters as well. Any and all feedback is appreciated
I myself really like the idea of journals. Not only can you describe the scene really well with third person like you have been doing, but you can also use the first person journal entries to get a little deeper into the feels. Oh the feels.
AWESOME fanfic by the way. I almost hate to read everyone's stuff. It makes me realize how much more I need to improve on my own...
That's what I was thinking, with the journals...I'd like Onmund in particular to have more of a voice than he's had so far. It's just as much his story as Nikhaya's, if not more so Alright, so that's one vote for journals. Think I'm going to get started on that.
And thank you I've spent a lot of time on this one...I know what you mean, though, I read other people's fanfics and RP posts on here and think, "Damn, what am I doing over here?"
Thanks again for taking the time to read it