Khasrin
Fusozayiit
I know the feeling. Its four am and I have posted another chapter in my fanfic
Cool I'll have to check it out (once I've had sleep...lol)
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I know the feeling. Its four am and I have posted another chapter in my fanfic
I hope you are ok with my critique I am simply putting my impressions on here. I think i would have had them sneak into Riften somehow instead of getting past the guards with a spell scroll. It is funny but perhaps a bit unrealistic if it is that easy to get past guards. Maybe they could have met in the ratway at the bar down there.
I notice alot of people in here reserve posts for chapters. How is it you know exactly how many chapters you are going to have? I simply cannot predict something like that!
Wonderful chapter. I couldn't stop laughing after the part about J'zargo watching them. I can just picture him silently sneak in the room, sit down in a chair next to the entrance, pull out a thing of bread, and start eating the bread as he watched the two of them.
Thank you
I know, right? J'zargo's actually done that to me a few times...go to bed, wake up w/Lover's Comfort bonus, and there he is in the chair, checking it all out lol
Khajiit thinks this tale is exceptional... And he is not talking about the one Nikhaya owns
In all seriousness, great story so far.
My rule of thumb is basically four pages in MS Word for a chapter. But then again I also have screenshots. Instead of length let events dictate chapters. If you have to you can break up something and make two chapters. I personally think they are fine
Anytime One of the greatest challenges of writing is where to give the reader a breakMy rule of thumb is basically four pages in MS Word for a chapter. But then again I also have screenshots. Instead of length let events dictate chapters. If you have to you can break up something and make two chapters. I personally think they are fine
Mine run about 10-12 pages in Word, now that I look Good lord. I try to end chapters where it seems natural to do so, but as the story gets more complex it gets harder to keep such long chapters cohesive and flowing...made me wonder if I was also overwhelming/confusing the reader.
Thanks for the feedback. Really enjoying The Nascent Ranger, BTW you've inspired me to change up my own writing style a bit.
I think the story is great, and chapter lengths are spot on, keep it up